Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Practice Personal Narrative

"Hey, Buddy do you see it?" exclaimed My Brother.
"See what?" I said.
"Look out your widow!" My brother said with excitement in his voice.  I immediately turned around, looked out the taxi window, and saw a big brownish-black tower.
"Holy cow!  It's incredible; I can't believe we're here!" I said.  It took us nearly 11 hours on the dot to travel to Paris.
I turned to my Dad and asked, "so when do we get to go op it."
"In just a few minutes," my Dad answered.  Our entire trip built up to this moment.  The moment we finally got to go up the Eiffel tower.

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